Feedback and Revisions

Based off of the commentary that I received from presenting my midterm admission I plan on making multiple revisions to improve the issue of my magazine. The first revision I plan on making to improve the quality of my magazine is to get rid of the border on my pages. It will give the pages more authenticity of a real magazine publication. Secondly I will add a more stylish font since it is a fashion magazine. The third edit I will be making is to line up the text in my article, so it looks crisp and sharp. A fourth revision is adding page numbers on the bottom of the pages. Once again to give more authenticity to the magazine.

The changes will overall make the magazine pages look more professional. Also make it more eye-catching for more units to be sold.

I will carry out the changes by scheduling new photoshoots and spending more time on publisher  and experimenting to create and perfect my magazine. Possibly with fonts layouts and photos.

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